in the shadow of the colossus

Submitted by Catherine-J on Sat, 02/07/2009 at 7:54pm.

Standing directly between the feet of my obstacle                      staring

upward at a mangled patch of hair                                       reeking

of the dried soak of itself and others                               attempting

the toppling of a skyscraper                                      wasting

patches of earth                                   composite               nutritious

create sustenances for                                     our species delicious

as they go crunch                          into the maws of a bigger, badder, building

lunch for the                         creeping crawling filling

suits.  ties.                    drawing flies

into              mouths.

agape

» posted in Catherine-J's Blog
 

Comments:

by Sandmaster - 8 months ago
Porto Portugal
Member Since: Oct 2008
Member Points: 84

Not half bad. Nice work.

by Catherine-J - 8 months ago
New York City United States
Member Since: Aug 2008
Member Points: 300

cyclops.eye?   it's cycloptic and binocular, is that what you mean?

by estevon - 8 months ago
Maine United States
Member Since: Oct 2008
Member Points: 1481

Is this CYCLOPS.EYE have it.

by Johnson-m-v - 8 months ago
kerala India
Member Since: Jan 2009
Member Points: 23

Great shadow !

Thanx for sharing...

congrats...

 

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