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If you are wanting to post on this blog here's how to do it. I am going to write a beginning paragraph for a story. Then you can continue the story by posting paragraphs of your own. For others like this go to www.thenoveltree.com

The Story ( You can submit name ideas also)

 The wind wiped my hair as I ran, searching for cover, screaming for help. I dashed to the storm shelter hoping to find my sister. Once I reached the cellar I yanked on the handle. It was jammed shut. I pounded on the door screaming and yelling to see if any one was inside. No answer. I crumpled into a ball on the door. Suddenly it opened to reveal a face. It was familiar. Strangely familiar. Yet I seemed not to know it.

Now that the story is over you can still post ideas and comments about the story.

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Comments


  • 21 Months Ago

    Kooterbobette

    XD They're good. Thanks for the suggestions!

  • 22 Months Ago

    kamakrsa

    how about....how i hate that knife or the knife that changed my life or the knife. Do u have any ideas? my sister...that changed maybe? Or the day it happened. These are pretty lame titles but well u asked for titles so dont blame me!!!!

  • 3 Years Ago

    Kooterbobette

    With his loose hand he grabbed my wrist. "Getting revenge." He whispered. He grabbed Roberta, threw me to the ground, and walked out the door. Every one was to stunned to move. As soon as Alex gathered his senses he ran out the door screaming his head off. I heard a car motor then the squelling of tires on ashvault. She was gone. I felt like crying but nothing came out.

     

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  • 3 Years Ago

    mlmlly

    "I think this belongs to you," he says, shoving Roberta into my arms.

    She leans against me limply, barely conscious. "What did you do to her?" I ask, stroking her head.

     


  • 3 Years Ago

    Kooterbobette

    I pulled away from Alex for a second. "Sure." I said, and walked over and hugged him. He looked surprised, yet pleased. Then another knock. Attida stood up and got it. It was Mr. Cwornal, holding an unconscious Roberta in his arms.
  • 3 Years Ago

    mlmlly

    "Can I come in now?" He asks Attida, his eyes pleading.
  • 3 Years Ago

    Kooterbobette

    I smiled and hugged Alex tighter. The door opened. It was Pete.
  • 3 Years Ago

    mlmlly

    "For saving Attida's life," he says.
  • 3 Years Ago

    Kooterbobette

    "For what?" I asked.
  • 3 Years Ago

    mlmlly

    "Thanks," he whispered into my ear.
  • 3 Years Ago

    Kooterbobette

    That was the first time he had hugged me in years. I savored the moment, wondering how long it would last.
  • 3 Years Ago

    mlmlly

    Attida smiled at me, "Thanks. I wouldn't have been able to do that."

    I shrugged, "Pipi's controllable, you just have to know how to get under her skin."

    Alex hugged me.


  • 3 Years Ago

    Kooterbobette

    I walk to Roberta. "Or you Pipy." Pipy was my nickname for Roberta, the one she hated. Her glare hardened on me but Pete grabbed her by the shoulders and led her out into the hall with him. It was just Attida, Alex, and me.
  • 3 Years Ago

    mlmlly

    Attida pushes Roberta aside, ignoring the knife, like it's just a toy Roberta wanted to show her. It's as if she read my thoughts, because she says, "Dad, I don't want you here right now. Please leave."
  • 3 Years Ago

    Kooterbobette

    But did they feel that way about each other. I wanted them to. And I wanted Pete to leave. Attidas dad or not I still didn't like him.
  • 3 Years Ago

    mlmlly

    What about Alex? There was so much fear in his eyes, this was his first time being in front of the knife and not behind it. Yet he had another emotion in his eyes, protection for Attida. As I looked at both of them I realized, this was my family.


  • 3 Years Ago

    Kooterbobette

    Who should I protect? Attida? Myself?
  • 3 Years Ago

    mlmlly

    Both could do harm, there was no doubt about that. But which one should I worry about?

     


  • 3 Years Ago

    Kooterbobette

    Great. Two knivies. Just Great. One knife bearer an incredibly talented 40 year old man. The other a clumsy 8 year old. But yet...
  • 3 Years Ago

    mlmlly

    "NO! Alex lunged, his arms trying to protect Attida.

    "Son, let the little girl do her work," Pete says, pointing a knife at Alex.


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