Poem #1

Submitted by RedSoxpawn on Wed, 08/12/2009 at 6:38am.

This is a really cheesy poem I know. I started this and went to sleep on it so I kinda lost the flow I had going, but I made something work in the end

Cupcakes

Inspired by cupcakewithsprinkles (ccws)

Cupcakes come in all styles,

Some fancy and flashy, others simple and plain

And others that have brains,

Yet one thing in common is

Their all the best they can be.

If I were to choose a cupcake I would be lost

With all the colors, flavors, and decorations

Sitting on the shelves showing their goodies

I would love to greet them all

But I wouldn’t eat them all.

Instead I would like

To tell them how great they are,

In the mornings, or at parties,

Or any other time that they

Are available to the public.

In the end I would love to say

That cupcakes are the greatest

And there should be more for use in the world

To spread their sugary goodness

For the greater good in the world.

» posted in MY WRITING KEEP YOUR HANDS OFF, EYES ONLY

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Comments:

by Madison12345 - 40 days ago
McKinney United States

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Mmmm... My Language teacher would say "Dig deeper! What is the point you are trying to convey?" But also thinks Shel Silverstein's Poetry would be a D at the best. Look where he is! I totally love it. Are you talking about Cupcakewithsprinkles or just cupcakes in general?

by THE_GRIMACE - 3 months ago
youngstown, ohio United States

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haha, wonderful, love it.

by G-Money7 - 3 months ago
International

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Great poem!

I should expect something this good from a Red Sox fan!

by blackfirestorm666 - 3 months ago
Manchester England

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great poem red well done :))

by CupcakewithSprinkles - 3 months ago
California United States

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nice!! I love being a cupcake but one question red , is it cupcake as in person as in me or as in just fancy cupcake? anyways AWESOME poem

by RedSoxpawn - 3 months ago
Birmingham, Alabama United States

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thnks Shree

by shreeganeshMpillai - 3 months ago
coimbatore India

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this is a good poem. i almost forgot the icecream for many years. thanks for remind to me.

by RedSoxpawn - 3 months ago
Birmingham, Alabama United States

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I don't know the style I haven't written any poems in a long time, and I don't really like to hold myself to one, I think this is free verse though. and my point CUP CAKES ARE GOOD.