my poem about.. hugs

Submitted by chessman_calum on Sun, 09/06/2009 at 2:12pm.

Please say your honest opinion!

Hugs:

Its wonderous what a hug can do,

a hug can cheer you when your blue,

a hug can say I love you so,

or gee, I hate to see you go.

 

A hug is welcome back again,

or great to see you,

or where've you been?,

a hug can soothe a small childs pain,

or bring a rainbow after rain.

 

A hug! There's no doubt about it,

we scarcely could survive without it,

a hug delights and warms and charms,

it must be why good gave us arms.

 

Hugs are great for fathers and mothers,

sweet for sisters, swell for brother,

chances are some favourite aunts,

love them more than potted plants :S.

 

Kittens crave them, puppies love them,

heads of state are not above them,

a hug can break the language barrier,

they can make the dullest day seem merrier.

 

No need to fret about the store of them,

the more you are of them!,

so stretch those arms without delay,

and give someone a hug today.

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by chessman_calum - 2 months ago
Buckinghamshire England
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:D at least it is liked :D

by gramos9956 - 2 months ago
United States
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Very nice poem, Calum.  :-)

by PerfectGent - 2 months ago
St Andrews Scotland
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a hug is worth more than all the medicines in a chemists shop.

i planned to have a t-shirt printed with the slogan

'to hell with PC, hug a stranger today'

by CupcakewithSprinkles - 2 months ago
California United States
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awesome *Hugs

by RedSoxpawn - 2 months ago
Birmingham, Alabama United States
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if you think that calum then maybe you should go take it up with the people in charge of languages> try that for luck and for your information I know a good bit of Kings English apart from my own American, and slang

by Yuyuuchan - 2 months ago
Koromubusu United States
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I really enjoyed the message. :D

by chessman_calum - 2 months ago
Buckinghamshire England
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thats because you speak crap english! english is the language of england, not america! they should have american!!

by RedSoxpawn - 2 months ago
Birmingham, Alabama United States
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see I have no clue what he talking about

by chessman_calum - 2 months ago
Buckinghamshire England
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oi!

by RedSoxpawn - 2 months ago
Birmingham, Alabama United States
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hey calum and I both speak english and half the time I don't know what he's talking about haha

by Portuguesx2 - 2 months ago
Lisbon Portugal
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like my english language knowledge :(

by chessman_calum - 2 months ago
Buckinghamshire England
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hehe, translation websites are RUBBISH!

by Portuguesx2 - 2 months ago
Lisbon Portugal
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bahh nevermind I may translate in google traducer ;)

by RedSoxpawn - 2 months ago
Birmingham, Alabama United States
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I was thinking that is what he meant, but I don't think so

by chessman_calum - 2 months ago
Buckinghamshire England
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an alien type of my own language :D, you are reading english like an alien, what words/bits dont you get?

by Portuguesx2 - 2 months ago
Lisbon Portugal
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No I mean the writing poems thing. The quality of it is good, but I don't understand some words. I think you speak like an allien type english with new vocabulary (kidding).

by chessman_calum - 2 months ago
Buckinghamshire England
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getting old, you saying you dont have hugs?

by Crazychessplaya - 2 months ago
Warsaw Poland
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One of life's secrets is no longer a secret to you...

by RedSoxpawn - 2 months ago
Birmingham, Alabama United States
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ok calum thats somethign for you to repsond to.......

by Portuguesx2 - 2 months ago
Lisbon Portugal
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you're getting old dude...

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