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Dedication to a friend

Submitted by emiab on Fri, 06/27/2008 at 10:31am.

Hot, too hot here for real chess thoughts.  So I'm thinking to let chess be by itself for a while, after all,it has survived  centuries without me having to do anything with it. So , lol, if chess can survive without emiab, than emiab can survive 1/2 h without thinking or doing anything about chess.

I want to just throw a glance on writing. Please forgive me if it's going to be long .

It isn't mine either, so that's what the quatation marks are for .

" Today  now I want to take up the first phase of his journey to Quality, the nonmethaphisical phase and this will be pleasant. It's nice to start journeys pleasantly, even when you know they won't end that way. Using his class notes as reference material I want to reconstruct the way in which Quality became a working concept for him in the teaching of rhetoric. His second phase, the metaphysical one, was tenuous and speculative, but this first phase, in which he simply taught rhetoric, was by all accounts solid and pragmatic and probably deserves to be judged on its own merits, independently of the second phase.

He'd been innovating extensively. He'd been having trouble with students who had nothing to say. At first he thought it was laziness but later it became apparent that it wasn't. They couldn't think of anything to say.

One of them, a girl with strong-lensed glasses, wanted to write a five- hundred -word essay about the United States. He was used to the sinking feeling that comes from statements like this and suggested  without disparagement that she narrow it to just Bozeman. 

When the paper came due she didn't have it and was quite upset.She had tried and tried but she just couldn't think of anything to say.

He had already discussed her with her previous  instructors and they'd confirmed his impressions of her.She was very serious, disciplined and hardworking, but extremely dull.Not a spark of creativity in her anywhere. Her eyes, behind the thick-lensed glasses, were the eyes of a  drudge. She wasn't bluffing him, she really coudn't think of anything to say and was upset by her inability to do as she was told.

It just stumped him. Now, he couldn't think of anything to  say.A silence occured and then a peculiar answer:"Narrow it down to the main street of Bozeman".It was a stroke of insight.

She nodded dutifully and went out. But just before her next class she came back in  real distress, tears this time, distress that had obviously been there for a long time. She still couldn't think of  anything to say, and couldn't understand why, if she couldn't think of anything about  all of Bozeman, she should be able to think of something about just one street.

He was furious. " You're not looking ! " he said. A memory came back  of his own dismissal  from the University for having too much to say. For every fact  there is an infinity of hypotheses. The more you look  the more you see. She really wasn't looking  and yet somehow didn't understand this. He told her angrily "Narrow it down to the front  of one building  on the main street of Bozeman. The Opera House. Start with the upper-left brick." Her eyes , behind the thick-lensed glasses opened wide. 

She came in the next class with a puzzled look and handed him a five- thousand -word essay on the front  of the Opera House on the main street of Bozeman, Montana. "I sat  at  the hamburger stand across the street", she said, "and started writing  about the first brick and then the second brick and then by the third brick it all started to come and I couldn't  stop. They thought I was crazy and they kept kidding me but here it all is. (...)she was blocked because she was trying to repeat , in her writing, things she had already heard . (...) She couldn't  think of anything to write about Bozeman because she couldn't  recall  anything  she had  heard worth repeating.  She was strangely  unaware that she could look and see freshly  for herself as she wrote without primary regard for what had been said before. The narrowing down to one brick destroyed the blockage  because it was  so obvious  she had  to do some original  and direct seeing ". fragment by . Robert M Pirsig.  The book is Zen and The Art of Motorcycle Maintenance.

 


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Comments:

by Vance917 - 52 days ago
Rockville, Maryland United States
Member Since: Oct 2007
Member Points: 349
Foreigner's "Juke Box Hero" is too good not to listen to, and available on You tube!
by emiab - 53 days ago
Romania
Member Since: Feb 2008
Member Points: 255
thx for your free association Vance. I never heard of them, but you make a nice analysis here. "all in all, we are just a brick in the wall" can be freely translated in many ways. I prefer this one " all that exists does not exist only and only for oneself but is connected to everything and everyone else." The books sound interesting. I don't know however when I am going to read them.
by Stavisky - 53 days ago
Essen-Antwerp Belgium
Member Since: Nov 2007
Member Points: 373

Nice text emiab wich makes me thinking about Thomas Pynchon's " Gravity's Rainbow " ! Did you read it ? I think this is certainly something for you !

Friendly greetings,

Herman


by Vance917 - 53 days ago
Rockville, Maryland United States
Member Since: Oct 2007
Member Points: 349

A brick ... just one brick.  If I may free associate, then what comes to my mind is Woody Harrelson, I believe in "White Men Can't Jump", when he was an architect, and after he lost the girl he got his life back together and gave a lecture about how a brick aspires to be more.  As you might guess, the slide show illustrated magnificent works of architecture.

I am also reminded of Pink Floyd's "The Wall" ("all in all we're just another brick in the wall"), and even Foreigner's "Juke Box Hero" ("... and that day in the rain, and that one guitar, and his whole life changed"), with the common theme of pivoting on a fixed Archimedian point (be it a brick or a guitar).  Who knows?  Maybe your posting is a fixed Archimedian point upon which Chess.com will pivot, and now chess cannot live without you!


by Dozy - 53 days ago
Blue Mountains Australia
Member Since: Aug 2007
Member Points: 744

Goodness me, emiab, you thought you were getting away from chess and, voila, chess is looking over your shoulder.  Let's quote just a little bit of that in blue type: 

She still couldn't think of  anything to say, and couldn't understand why, if she couldn't think of anything about  all of Bozeman, she should be able to think of something about just one street. He was furious. " You're not looking ! " he said.

It's almost a quote from "Searching for Bobby Fischer" when the young Waitzkin moves too quickly and his coach berates him for not even looking at one particular move.  "But it doesn't go anywhere," said Josh.  "That doesn't matter.  You didn't look!"

I teach a creative writing class and, I'm very lucky that almost all of the students are very creative.  A couple are not and your story will be worth telling to see if it can help them.

By the way, being in the southern hempisphere I have the opposite problem to you:  it's almost too cold to play chess at this time of the morning.  My fingers don't want to type.  (Thank goodness we use a mouse to make our moves.)

 


 

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