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Just Hold Me

Submitted by sakura22 on Sat, 07/12/2008 at 6:50pm.

              Just Hold Me

 

 

Not many have ever known
and if I tell - who would believe?
There's nothing I can call my own
not even the things I have achieved.

It's always better that way
All that is aching inside
It's better for it to stay -
covered up with hurt's pride.

All in good time
I will open the gate
of this little heart of mine
in a moment of fate.

For a soul that's been torn and
a heart controlled by other
there's not much you can do
But to hold me in your arms -
my dearest Mother.


» posted in sakura22's Blog
 

Comments:

by fog - 24 days ago
Toronto Canada
Member Since: Jun 2008
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sweet

by Skybax - 24 days ago
United States
Member Since: Jan 2008
Member Points: 91

i write lyrics… so kinda poetry…'cept it has a chorus 8)

by Zhane - 30 days ago
Lancashire,England England
Member Since: Aug 2007
Member Points: 1275

You should get a poetry prize for that!!


by rich - 34 days ago
United Kingdom
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Cool.
by s73vn - 37 days ago
center jakarta Indonesia
Member Since: Jul 2008
Member Points: 69

it's so beautiful....

Cry


by animeangel - 37 days ago
Curepe Trinidad/Tobago
Member Since: Jan 2008
Member Points: 638

aww.....Cry but great poem!^^


by rlc - 37 days ago
England United Kingdom
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♥♥♥Cry
by samas - 37 days ago
UAE DUBAI Palestine
Member Since: Jun 2008
Member Points: 11

we have a wisdom says

heaven under mothers feet

great poet 


by emilyispsycho7 - 38 days ago
United States
Member Since: Mar 2008
Member Points: 1304
awesome♥
 

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