This Human Race

Submitted by sally_cinnamon on Mon, 08/25/2008 at 12:37pm.

Walking barefoot, through the town centre,

it's 5 in the morning,

the milkman's waking up.

On our way home he passes us,

he doesn't smile, or greet us, I think it's because-

He's been getting kind of lonely,

(he's got things on his mind).

Car needs a service,

(the passing of time).

He's worrying that, he's been left behind,

it's too late now.

(There's no re-wind)

 

The jogger passing by,

doesn't slow down to say 'Hi',

I wonder why? I wonder why?

As I wander...

 

There's a cat in the bushes,

(outside of our house).

He's got his paw pinned,

firmly on the tail of a mouse.

Occassionally,

he will let her go,

she tries to run but she's just too slow.

Our dog sees' it all from,

up at his high window,

like a kid with popcorn,

watching a film show.

Life and death on this (A Minor) scale,

that's the end of her tale.

 

The jogger running by,

he never slows down to say 'Hi',

I wonder why? I wonder why?

As I wander-

 

I bet you're thinking,

you've heard all this before.

Our ordinary lives.

(Who could want more?)

Met disappointment.

(I showed him the door)

Cos life is short.

(That's for sure.)

This is no other,

species quite like us,

maybe black ants,

(living in the dust)

exploring, fighting

(in their colonies)

Tiny, dis-functional

families...

 

We join this human race-

at a walking pace.

So much to see,

so much to be,

slow down.

(Honey)

 

Comments:

by musicboy - 12 months ago
England England
Member Since: Feb 2008
Member Points: 1

I like the feeling of verisimilitude in your words (been dying to use that word for ages!).  And the way they come from the heart

D x

by ILLYRIA - 13 months ago
Calif United States
Member Since: May 2008
Member Points: 258

that reminds me of reading poetry all the time back in--when was it?--1997.  Haven't looked at any in like a year now, so thanks. 

 

(I remember thinking Wordsworth was a doof and preferring Blake.  But mostly it's a blur.)

by sally_cinnamon - 15 months ago
England
Member Since: Mar 2008
Member Points: 299

I know I know - laugh and the world laughs with you :-)

by Vance917 - 15 months ago
North Potomac, Maryland United States
Member Since: Oct 2007
Member Points: 1131

Depressing, but good!  Of course, you also know that a smile can be contagious, right?  Now if only I could say that in a poem!

 

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