kool poem!!!♥

that poem is sooo touching and sad that u had someone and lost him beacuse of something sorry.My cuz says that poem was very nice she is 7 years old

very nice poem

Very good poem.

Awesome poem ♥

Don't do it---pleasse!!!

NICE poem.

ADK

Wonderfully done!

There's a lot of power and emotion behind those words. This poem must mean a lot to you.

Thanks for sharing!

Aww...this poem is so aww....it's really beautiful

 

I like! You love someone, who you recently broke up with. Now you're just friends, but you want... no, you need your relationship to be something more again. At least, that's what the poem's saying to me. But a couple phrases struck me as odd:

"A change of sexuality"... was a sex-change operation involved?! Probably that's not what you mean, but living in the Bay Area, it's what comes to mind when you use those words.

"An old phase"... usually when a phase ends, you've grown out of it, and you no longer desire the same things. But you still desire the same guy.

Your word choices are generally very good--descriptive and efficient. I also like the rhyme scheme--it makes the poem flow, without being too structured. :)

did you pen this?

I like them.. those words.. They're beautiful and so meaningful.. even though little bit sad and full of uncertainty..

Hmmm.. U must be falling in love with someone now.. Who is the lucky guy, anyway? :)