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Submitted by Catherine-J on Thu, 03/12/2009 at 4:04am.

it's the early morning oranges that seem a little pink.  An ochre kinda pumpkin crowning bluish-gray sort of wink. 

an immediate source of windblown tumblewed stationary phallangecal waverings skyward, stretching into dawns newly revealed undercarriage.  fading into reflections of seas, eradicating constellations until the next spin.

Wonderbluss careening towards oblivion, tanking,  floating markers lighthoused subsequent harbingers floating to shreds, wretched, writhing

                                                       seething without

the inclinations, sublimations, tribulations devout                                            no one elses affectations, ostentations, deviations throughout

your other machinations.... articulations....  infatuations.  without a doubt.

 

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» posted in Catherine-J's Blog
 

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by Writch - 8 months ago
Connecticut Western Reserve United States
Member Since: Jul 2008
Member Points: 1760

Maybe its a good idea to add this dot dot dot to your (growing) "the great machine" thread on PWoC?

fluid lyrics, ambrosia, flows down... drenching
dewed empirics, white noise you slow down... quenching
words loosened, loose-ended in dust-free sips... pure synthesis
the juice ends, transcendant, in just three drips... your ellipsis

by WhatARook - 8 months ago
Brooklyn United States
Member Since: Nov 2007
Member Points: 18

Enticing images, nice pacing... I think I get the jist... Thanks Catherine-J. Inspired me to post one of my own.

 

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