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I Will

Right, we believed in the same feeling
We gazed at the vanished memory
Now I can't meet you
But I can hide my painful thoughts
And become stronger
I'll go ascertain that

If it's the overflowing tears, it's okay that they don't stop now
Light should be shining into the finale of the sadness
The things that I destroyed when I was too rushed
I'll regain them, to walk like myself

Let me say goodbye first
To you again back then
I believe that surely, there's a new tomorrow

Time that passes by unhesitatingly and unhurriedly
I won't forget the pain that changes into kindness
My heart that I wounded when I was too reckless
I'll embrace it, for the reborn me
I Will

Comments


  • 3 years ago

    k05

    Nice=)

  • 3 years ago

    paul211

    I like this very much., I think that you should learn basic rules of poetry, it will help you in rendering a vibrant and flowing poetry.

    You will learn about:

    1.Bad poetry called: singsong

    2.Light poetry called: verse

    3.Poetry genres such as: concrete, prose, epic, lyric, narrative etc...

    Here are interesting links:

      http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Poetry

      http://library.thinkquest.org/27864/data/cyoc/poetry.html

      http://www.poetry.com/techniques/refsum.asp

    Keep working at it as you do have an unquestionable talent to write poetry.

    I learned poetry writing when I was studying classical study, poetry started in the 3rd  year and continued in the 4th year of schooling. The classical course was 8 years long. The first year is elementary, followed by: syntaxe, method, versification, rhetoric1 and 2 and finally philosophy 1 and 2. 

    Two years of learning poetry, one lesson every week for 45 mins and I enjoyed it so much. 

  • 3 years ago

    hater101

    cool

  • 3 years ago

    Cross

    thats how most my logs have been, read doubt and trust

  • 3 years ago

    Ladybuggy17

    Wow! Thats good you should keep on writing!! :)

  • 3 years ago

    Cross

    everytime marquis...everytime

  • 3 years ago

    lulzman11

    what ur saying is that u'll make up for what u missed between u and the other person by saying that no matter what u'll make up what u missed and that u'll make everything better and become urself again instead of being what you have become from that missing experience.right?

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