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Submitted by Kooterbobette on Fri, 05/09/2008 at 2:49pm.

I love the way the rain falls,

love the way the grass grows,

love the way the trees sway.

I love the way the thunder rumbles,

love a flower's petals,

love the falling snow.

I love the clear blue skies,

love the sun's bright rays,

love the way you love me,

each and every day. 


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Comments:

by IJReilly - 3 months ago
Chicago United States
Member Since: May 2008
Member Points: 58
"Nice warm poem".  Please forgive me for suggesting two corrections, though you did not ask for them.  First, "flowers", as used in the verse, is possessive - "flower's".  Second, the plural form of sky is skies.  Don't mean to be offend.  Thank you for sharing. 
by sakura22 - 3 months ago
Burning it out in the 580 United States
Member Since: Feb 2008
Member Points: 7002
Aww this poem is just adorable *-*!!
 
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