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My Attempt In Poetry..really weird this coming from me ^_^

I shed my tears over and over again for the same person

And I don’t even know the reasons

Deep inside my heart I’m screaming

“Girl, get over him!”

But he has already left his mark.

 

My brain will not work, my heart will skip

Whenever he pops into my head and does his tricks

My mind would yell, “Go away!”

But my heart would beg “No, I need you. Please stay.”

 

I don’t find the stars pretty anymore

I can’t see it shines like it used to

I can’t torment myself anymore

I persuaded myself “Believe it, Girl. It’s through.”

 

So at night I would pray

That soon his face would fade away

So maybe I don’t have to fight

To get some sleep tonight.

 

I feel weird... There's a lot of grammar problems there though... and I think it doesn't makes sense.....0_0

Comments


  • 3 years ago

    Hadi_Ati

    Thanx V !

  • 3 years ago

    VINI_SHA95

    i read it once and i read it again.it still a wonderful poem.

  • 3 years ago

    Hadi_Ati

    Yes I am!

  • 3 years ago

    FXCalliber

    Hmm.. You're fine now...

  • 3 years ago

    Hadi_Ati

    I dunno.. I think that's me..you know a few weeks ago...^_^

  • 3 years ago

    FXCalliber

    Nice Poem! where do you get this idea?

  • 3 years ago

    RedSoxpawn

    ok

  • 3 years ago

    Hadi_Ati

    huhu...

  • 3 years ago

    RedSoxpawn

    I know he's not being serious note the laughter at the end of my statement

  • 3 years ago

    Hadi_Ati

    He's messing around..he just told me that it's witty..

  • 3 years ago

    RedSoxpawn

    oh you know it's good if your brother is willing to say so hahaha

  • 3 years ago

    NikolaiAan

    Very nice! I like it Ati..

  • 3 years ago

    Hadi_Ati

    Thank you... I'm still working on it though..

  • 3 years ago

    sjpdna

    It's a nice poem!

  • 3 years ago

    THE_GRIMACE

    good work!

  • 3 years ago

    Hadi_Ati

    I see........and thanx!

  • 3 years ago

    chappell11

    thats pretty good. in poetry grammer isnt important.

  • 3 years ago

    RedSoxpawn

    haha

  • 3 years ago

    Hadi_Ati

    ^_^

  • 3 years ago

    RedSoxpawn

    as long as I'm not 10 minutes late I'm ok

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