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my poem about.. hugs

Please say your honest opinion!

Hugs:

Its wonderous what a hug can do,

a hug can cheer you when your blue,

a hug can say I love you so,

or gee, I hate to see you go.

 

A hug is welcome back again,

or great to see you,

or where've you been?,

a hug can soothe a small childs pain,

or bring a rainbow after rain.

 

A hug! There's no doubt about it,

we scarcely could survive without it,

a hug delights and warms and charms,

it must be why good gave us arms.

 

Hugs are great for fathers and mothers,

sweet for sisters, swell for brother,

chances are some favourite aunts,

love them more than potted plants :S.

 

Kittens crave them, puppies love them,

heads of state are not above them,

a hug can break the language barrier,

they can make the dullest day seem merrier.

 

No need to fret about the store of them,

the more you are of them!,

so stretch those arms without delay,

and give someone a hug today.

Comments


  • 10 months ago

    Hannah_g_f

    I love to hug you and I love you :-) xxxx <3

  • 2 years ago

    blackfirestorm666

    Lovely!!

  • 3 years ago

    chessman_calum

    :D at least it is liked :D

  • 3 years ago

    gramos9956

    Very nice poem, Calum.  :-)

  • 3 years ago

    CupcakewithSprinkles

    awesome *Hugs

  • 3 years ago

    RedSoxpawn

    if you think that calum then maybe you should go take it up with the people in charge of languages> try that for luck and for your information I know a good bit of Kings English apart from my own American, and slang

  • 3 years ago

    Yuyuuchan

    I really enjoyed the message. :D

  • 3 years ago

    chessman_calum

    thats because you speak crap english! english is the language of england, not america! they should have american!!

  • 3 years ago

    RedSoxpawn

    see I have no clue what he talking about

  • 3 years ago

    chessman_calum

    oi!

  • 3 years ago

    RedSoxpawn

    hey calum and I both speak english and half the time I don't know what he's talking about haha

  • 3 years ago

    Portuguesx2

    like my english language knowledge :(

  • 3 years ago

    chessman_calum

    hehe, translation websites are RUBBISH!

  • 3 years ago

    Portuguesx2

    bahh nevermind I may translate in google traducer ;)

  • 3 years ago

    RedSoxpawn

    I was thinking that is what he meant, but I don't think so

  • 3 years ago

    chessman_calum

    an alien type of my own language :D, you are reading english like an alien, what words/bits dont you get?

  • 3 years ago

    Portuguesx2

    No I mean the writing poems thing. The quality of it is good, but I don't understand some words. I think you speak like an allien type english with new vocabulary (kidding).

  • 3 years ago

    chessman_calum

    getting old, you saying you dont have hugs?

  • 3 years ago

    Crazychessplaya

    One of life's secrets is no longer a secret to you...

  • 3 years ago

    RedSoxpawn

    ok calum thats somethign for you to repsond to.......

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