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The Sequel

Submitted by Kooterbobette on Sun, 06/15/2008 at 11:13am.

If you have not read my blog "Story Starter" you might want to read that before you read this story.

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The Sequel (You can submit titles to)

 CHAPTER 1

I stared out Alex's car window as we raced down the highway, speeding terribly. Alex swerved sharply to the left and the half a dozen boxes on the seat next to me slid across the seat and piled up against me. We had to find her. We just had to.

Alex swore. Attida scowled and said "What is it?" Alex turned to her. "I lost the car." "What!?!" I screamed in his ear. "Lost it? How did you lose it? Whey didn't you watch it more closely?!?" Alex looked ashamed. I crossed my arms across my chest and pouted. Suddenly there was some new worries. A siren sounded from right behind us. "Uh oh." Attida whispered. "Ummmmm." I said. "How are we gonna explain this to the cop? Well it's like this Mr. Officer. We had to save my sister from a lunitic who's kiddnapping her as we speak and he kiddnapped her because I killed his daghter because he was trying to kill Attida to cacth the magical disease she has to get power. That'll sound great to him won't it?" I pouted again.
Alex just groaned.

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by mlmlly - 59 days ago
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I gulp, waiting to hear an interesting story.

"My family had always been dangerous, but it wasn't till we encountered a beast that we became real Dacana," he pauses, to see if I'm listening

by mlmlly - 59 days ago
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"Stop here Son," Pete said, sitting in the pasenger seat, next to Alex.

Alex grumbled, but stopped.

"Dad, what do you need?" Attida looked at him, concern in his eyes.

"Oh just my medicene hon," Pete says, patting her hand.

"Which one?" Alex, asked.

"My Dacana one, you know, so I don't turn into one." Pete said calmly.

Pete was like a grandfather to me, and you know how grandfathers love to joke. But this was no joke.

by Kooterbobette - 2 months ago
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So we started on the road.
by mlmlly - 2 months ago
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"What!" He cried out, "Well then I'm definetly coming with you, I don't want my baby girl getting hurt."

Alex put his arm arund Attida, as if to say, I can take care of her on my own, thank you very much. "But we don't have a car," Alex said.

"You don't, I do," Pete said pulling out keys from his pocket, 'and with a new liscene plate, the cops won't be chasing us." Pete threw Alex the keys.

Alex grinned, "OK."


by Kooterbobette - 2 months ago
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Then he smiled. "I can't go on foot but I can drive." Alex shook his head. He took Pete by the shoulder and walked him down the hill. He waved at Attida and I to follow. When at the bottom Alex told him about the police.
by mlmlly - 2 months ago
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"We're going to save Roberta," He said simply.

You could see the aniexty in Pete's eyes, he wanted to go so badly.

Attida put her arm around her dad and hugged, "Daddy, you know you can't go. It would be too hard for you."

"You're right," Pete said, straightening up. But he still had tears in his eyes.  


by Kooterbobette - 2 months ago
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I didn't even have time to think. Alex made the desision for me.
by mlmlly - 2 months ago
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He wobbled up the hill, panting, his hand on his hip.

"Dad!" Attida cried, flinging her arms around his neck.

"How'd you get here? You shouldn't be here!" She wept into his neck. Then she walked him up the hill.

Despite what his daughter said Pete was grinning. "So, what are you youngsters doing?" He sounded like he wanted to join us, like the little loner kid who wants to play with his older siblings.

I bit my lip, I knew he couldn't come with us, it would be to hard for him. So  what were we suppose to tell him?  


by Kooterbobette - 2 months ago
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CHAPTER 5

Pete.


by mlmlly - 2 months ago
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i expected the policeman had chased us down, and was going to put us into jail. The person I expected didn't come up the hill. The least expected person did.
by Kooterbobette - 2 months ago
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We stopped. What else could we do?
by mlmlly - 2 months ago
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"The police!" Attida screamed, running right behind me.

"Hurry! Hurry!" Alex shouted, trying to help us up the hill.

"Put your hands up!" said a cold voice.


by Kooterbobette - 2 months ago
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I started walking again. Then I heard sirens. "Run!"
by mlmlly - 2 months ago
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But how could I explain that to her?

Alex's voice called to us from a hill, "Come on. We have to hurry if you want to get there."

 


by Kooterbobette - 2 months ago
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I shook of her arm. "I'm alright." I said. But I knew something wasn't right. "Does your stomach hurt?" she asked. I shook my head. My heart hurt.
by mlmlly - 2 months ago
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Alex took bigger steps, and Attida and I slowed down, falling behind him. "What's the matter?" Attida said, putting her arm around me.
by Kooterbobette - 2 months ago
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Alex whirled. "Don't tell me your tired already." I shook my head. "Never mind." They would never belive me anyway. What would the point be in telling them?
by mlmlly - 2 months ago
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I didn't understand that louder whisper, why would her voice become louder? Maybe Attida and Alex heard it.

"Hey guys," I start, then bite my lip, afraid to ask.


by Kooterbobette - 2 months ago
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"Help me..." One whisper was louder then the others. I whirled around, looking for her. But no one was there. It hurt.
by mlmlly - 2 months ago
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I kept hearing Roberta's voice. As we walked I heard it in the grass, in the trees, and in the birds' songs.
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