Who Like Poetry?

« Blogs home

Submitted by Fairyghost on Sun, 05/18/2008 at 3:01pm.

Hey everyone this is my book. go to this site to read info on it. please comment back here and tell me what you think.

http://www.iuniverse.com/bookstore/book_detail.asp?isbn=0-595-49457-9

» posted in Fairyghost's Blog

| 93 reads | 4 comments

Comments:

by emiab - 3 months ago
Romania

Member Since: Feb 2008
Member Points: 270

wow ! now THAT is a really beautiful poem . Thank you. Really nice . Yes , it shows real talent. Congrats.

by vampirelover - 3 months ago
new york city United States

Member Since: Dec 2007
Member Points: 58

people will finally see the potential of one of the states best poets

by Fairyghost - 3 months ago
Brooklyn NY United States

Member Since: Apr 2008
Member Points: 39

Thank you emiab for the comment.

Here is a possitive one

If My World Were Like Heaven

If my world were like heaven

There would be snow without winter

There would be gardens without the spring

If the world were like heaven

It wouldn’t be too cold nor to hot

Ice wouldn’t sting your face, and food would never rot

Heaven the world would be

The snow is every homeless blanket

The gardens are everyone’s love and peace

Water would always be pure in everyone’s faucet

If my world were like heaven to me

It would be free of pain

Everyone harmless and the world innocent

Hear the musical sound of rain

Every being so pleasant

To the music many heats filled, voices sing

My world like heaven

Which I create in my mind

Though I don’t know heaven

I want to go there when its time

But, until I get there

This type of heaven will always be in my mind

by emiab - 3 months ago
Romania

Member Since: Feb 2008
Member Points: 270

I went there. That is nice. It shows you can express deep feelings in words and in a very sensitive way. How about posting one poem about positive emotions here in your blog at chess com ? I would be more than interested to read it.

I keep my fingers crossed for a whole sale. :)

^ Back to top